The poses Nega Shelly and Bruce are in are quite fantastic.

The "Footsie" thing she's doing is cute and funny.

Colors/Shading on both are very good and soft.

I see a (minor) flaw in her face: her blushing is barely visible.

Also, her other tail is missing.

Her outfit is elegant. Her expression looks very sweet and loving.

Bruce's expression is quite cute.

His blushing is fine and a bit more visible than Nega Shelly's.

It needs a background like the inside of a cabin or a living room.

This pic may have some rough spots,but it's sweet and romantic.

Very nice poses i must say. How the fox girl is siting on the lap of the bat boy! Great idea! but i think that i wouled have looked more real when the boy wouled have holed her legs. In thise pose he looks a little stiff. You shouled look at they eyesballs of the boy. There way to far up and that makes it look like hes looking in the air. But they eyes and the pose of the girl is perfect. You made made the fur and the outfit of the fox fabuless! I aspetialy like her make up. But the one of the boy seems kinda boring to me. What comes to the coloring you did briliantly! I know how hard it is making traditionalart look so real. It is mutch harder then with photoshop! What very original is that you made different outline colors. Thats why you became 5 stars for technique!
All together it is a hardwork picture! Great job!!!