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Okay, her's the revised version. I'm probably not going to change it much after this, but I'm leaving the crit option up just to be sure.

Here's to good old fashion love ^_^

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:iconheather-the-echidna:
xD He really wants that kiss. Adorable pic.

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:iconromecat17:
That's really cute. :3

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:iconproforce:
I like the changes you've made. Sonic's hand holding the chocolate, the way he's bent over, inviting her, Sally's hand over her mouth like she finds this the silliest thing she's ever seen.... Even the way Sonic's feet are pointing and Sally's leg being bent. Each one adds something to the picture that I didn't even know was missing before. Great job sweetie.

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:iconaha-mccoy:
well Sally looks more shy and Sonic more naughty. hehe another nice sketch X3

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:iconbringonthethunder:
XD thank you! I think he wants it baaaad!

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:iconsorcererlance:
ooh, definitely loving the second version, more action going on and it's more obvious what Sonic wants ^^
:iconbringonthethunder:
Thank you sweetie! Someone had some good suggestions, and though I didn't change everything I took some advice and did a revision. I like the results.

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When I dream on my own, I'm alone, but I ain't lonely. For a dreamer night's the only time of day :heart:
:iconstokerbramwell:
Oh, I REALLY like the revised version! It looks a lot more like a slice of their lives. There's so much personality to it!
:iconnametherabbit:
awww

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:iconblackeaglea06:
Oh this is much improved the newer version is way better suited to their personalities! I could even see this happening for real, though it probably wouldnt :roll:
Cant wait to see this as a full fledged finished product :)

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